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04 May 2008 @ 08:41 pm
Captured Secrets - Chapter 10  

Title: Captured Secrets

Pairing[s]: KyuMin, YooSu, YunJae, KangTeuk, EunHae [and those will respectively be the only suju/donbang members who show up in the story]

Rating: PG for now, will go up later

Summary: The pirate’s life is made up of three essentials: money, booze, and women. A pirate’s status is determined by the number of women he has captured and enslaved. But what happens when a pirate accidentally snatches the wrong gender?

chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6 
chapter 7

chapter 8
chapter 9


-chapter ten: Pearl Blue Isle-

 

            “Today’s the day,” said Eeteuk, looking out at the oncoming patch of land.

 

            “Today’s the day!” shouted Kangin, stabbing a knife down onto his map. “We’ll be free from those she-men!”

            “Something’s gonna go wrong…” mumbled Kyuhyun, staring out at the nearing island, “I can feel it in the pit of my stomach.”

            “Christ, don’t ruin the moment, Kyu,” said Yunho, smacking the boy on the shoulder, “Let’s be optimistic about it! You want women, don’t you?”

            “Yes, but…I dunno, I just think something’s gonna go wrong,” repeated Kyuhyun. He shook his head and sighed. “I need something to drink.” He looked around. “Where’s Yoochun?”

            “Elite’s quarters. Catching up on some sleep,” answered Yunho, “Had issues with the she-devil and couldn’t get any sleep last night. Why don’t you ever have any problems with yours?”

            “Trust me, I have my full share of problems,” said Kyuhyun, rolling his eyes, “But I was fed up with him, so I chained him to the bed in a very un-suggestive and not-kinky-whatsoever way, and snuck him some poison to take away his voice for a few hours.”

            “Efficient.”

            “Very.”

 

            “Change of plans.”

            Eeteuk looked up from his book.

            “Hm?”

            “You’re coming with me,” said Kangin, walking over to the pretty boy and grabbing his arm. “We’re at Pearl Blue Isle.”

            “Wait, but I thought I wasn’t allowed off,” said Eeteuk, somewhat suspicious. I mean, it was all the better for him and his friends if they were let off, but the sudden change of heart was uncommon for pirates.

            “Don’t complain. You said you wanted fresh air, right?” questioned Kangin, pulling the other out of the library. “So let’s go.”

            “What about my friends?”

            “They’re coming too, don’t worry.”

 

(x)(x)(x)

 

            The island was smelly, unsightly, and simply barbaric.

            Jaejoong cringed at the dirtiness of the place.

            Eeteuk shot a glare at Kangin.

            “This is not ‘fresh air’!” he said, frowning, “It smelled better on the ship! Which is a big achievement for the vessel!”

            “Yes, well, you can’t be picky,” grumbled Kangin, quite through with the other’s complaints. He looked back at his fellow elite, and to make sure none of their crew was nearby.

            Eeteuk turned and glanced at his friends.

 

            We’ll take them to the Tavern and go to the backroom—there’s never anyone there. Then we’ll just kill ‘em off and leave,” said Kangin to the Elite. “No one will find out, and if we bribe Shindong enough, he’ll confiscate the evidence.”

 

            “Remember; when I drop my bracelet to the floor we run for it,” said Eeteuk to his friends, “No looking back. Just run as fast as you can.”

 

            The group approached a large building. Rambunctious laughter and shouts could be heard from inside.

            A bracelet fell to the floor.

            The pirate stepped up to the Tavern entrance.

            The four boys in dresses ran for it.

            “What the—hey!” shouted Kangin, not moving fast enough to grab onto Eeteuk’s arm.

            “Wait, let them go,” said Yunho, watching the boys run away. “This is better, isn’t it? We’ll just tell the crew that they got lost, and that we found their dead bodies later. There’s no way sissies like them would survive on this island anyways.”

            “Unless someone from the crew spots them and brings them back to the ship,” said Yoochun to his mates. “Then this trip would have been useless.”

            “So what’re we gonna do?” asked Kyuhyun.

            The question remained unanswered as the boys disappeared from the Elite’s view.

 

(x)(x)(x)

 

            “What do we do now?” asked Junsu, latching on worriedly to Jaejoong’s arm. “This place creeps me out.”

            Sungmin glared and hissed at every scumbag that looked their way, arms up and ready to fight.

            “Well, at least we don’t look too suspicious,” muttered Eeteuk, watching various women walk by them. “I just need to find someone who’ll take us back home.”

            “Even if we find someone with a ship, how can we possibly pay for the ride?” asked Jaejoong skeptically.

            “Oh, don’t worry about that,” said Eeteuk, grinning, “I stole some money back when we were on the pirate ship.”

            They had wandered to a darker part of town (though the majority of the island was bathed in darkness) and pirates clad with women were jostling around everywhere. The town never seemed to go to sleep.

            “Hey there honey~”

            Junsu screamed when a pair of arms wrapped around his waste and pulled him away from Jaejoong.

            Sungmin turned and lashed out at the drunken pirate. A single kick to the head was all he needed to send the man flying backwards.

            But there were more of them.

            “This one’s a looker!” exclaimed another haggard man, grabbing Jaejoong by the wrist. “Come on—how much for you?”

            Two tipsy pirates had Eeteuk in their arms, pulling the boy away from the group. Another pirate had grabbed Junsu around the waist and was dragging away.

            “Guys! I can’t keep up with all of you!” shouted Sungmin angrily, trying to fight off all the pirates at once. He ran after Junsu, the closest, but looked back when Eeteuk screamed. Jaejoong was wriggling in his captor’s grasp.

            “Sungmin! Behind you!” shouted Eeteuk.

            But the boy was too caught up trying to keep track of his friends. He barely had time to look back when the metal pole made contact with his legs.

            The boy in pink fell to the floor.

            “Stop it!” shouted Junsu, tears starting to fall from his eyes. But the men continued to beat Sungmin to the floor. Another pirate covered his mouth, preventing him from screaming.

            The brutes strapped Sungmin’s arms to his back and stuffed a gag into his mouth.

            A large pirate picked Sungmin up off the floor and slung him over his shoulder. “If you don’t stop moving, I’ll kill ya!”

            “I’m sorry, but I do believe that’s my job.”

            A switchblade was stabbed into the large pirate’s shoulder.

            Sungmin fell, but was swiftly caught by another.

            Kyuhyun pointed his small blade at the rogue pirate.

            “Get out of my sight, lest you wish to die,” he said with an icy glare.

            The pirate, about four times the size of Kyuhyun, growled and charged at the Elite.

            Kyuhyun swiftly moved in and stabbed the other in the chest, at x-marks-the-heart.

 

            Yunho’s long sword stabbed through the pirate’s arm, and fingers released Jaejoong from their grasp. The Elite stabbed his sword into the ground, the other pirate’s arm still pierced by it.

            “So now I have a question,” said Yunho to the suffering man with a blade stabbed into his right arm, “Do you like your left arm?”

            The man began to blubber like an idiot.

            “Thought so,” smirked Yunho, yanking his sword from the flesh. The man screamed, and fled once he had the chance.

 

            “God, do you ever stop crying?”

            Yoochun’s twin katanas pierced through the small gang of men surrounding Junsu.

            He showed no mercy. Every pirate within a five feet radius of him dropped to the floor, splattered with blood and dead.

            Junsu, completely shocked, fell to the floor.

           

            Kangin bashed the two pirates’ heads together and held his pistols to both their foreheads.

            “Now, I suggest that if you’d like to keep your heads on your shoulders, you run on the count of three,” said the Captain, guns clicking. “…Three.”

            The lowlifes bolted.

            Kangin grinned.

            He watched as various members of his crew surrounded the remaining rogue pirates and slashed them to pieces.

            Eeteuk stared from his position on the ground.

            “Why did you save me?”

            A pistol was shoved in front of his face.

            “The only one who’s going to kill you is me,” said the Captain.

            He twirled the guns with his fingers and returned them to his belt.

            “But now’s not the time.”

            He held out a hand to the boy on the floor.

            “The crew is watching.”

            Eeteuk was still slightly stunned.

            “Oh—right,” he mumbled, taking Kangin’s hand and letting the taller man pull him up.

           

            “Are you okay?” asked Yunho, helping Jaejoong off the ground.

            “Since when did you care?” snapped Jaejoong, sour that he had to be grateful for being saved by the pirate, “I have you the bruise on your cheek, remember?”

            Yunho scowled.

            “You know, just because I hate you doesn’t mean I can’t be friendly,” he said.

            “Well then you must be the greatest kind of imbecile,” replied Jaejoong.

            “Don’t use big words!”

 

            “Please, stop crying.”

            Yoochun offered a handkerchief to the blonde boy, but after no response, preceded to wipe Junsu’s tears himself.

            Junsu sniffed and looked up at the pirate.

            “Why are you being so nice?” he asked.

            “I just can’t stand it when people cry…” mumbled Yoochun, “It doesn’t mean I care or anything, it’s just irritating me.”

            He tucked the handkerchief into Junsu’s hand.

            “Try not to cry when you’re around me.”

 

            Kyuhyun held the smaller boy in his arms.

            “Wake up, asshole,” growled the Elite, jostling Sungmin a bit.

            But the boy didn’t respond.

            Kyuhyun looked to the other Elite’s and the rest of the crew.

            “We need to go back to the ship,” he ordered, “Now.”

 

(x)(x)(x)

 

            They were back on the ship.

            Eeteuk was so frustrated—he could have strangled something. Not only did his plan fail, but he had also put his friends in danger.

            Not to mention the fact that he had to be thankful to those damned Elite.

            He, Jaejoong, and Junsu sat in the library, empty of pirates.

            They had been locked inside.

 

            Kyuhyun ran his fingers over the various labels naming the poisons on his massive shelves filled with small glass vials.

            A voice sounded from the doorway.

            “Why don’t you let him die?”

            Kyuhyun grabbed one of the vials of poison from the shelf and turned to face the Captain.

            “If he dies, you’ll be free,” said Kangin, arms crossed and leaning on the frame of the door. “Isn’t that what you wanted?”

            The younger pirate kept his emotionless expression.

            “I don’t know what I want,” he said, walking past the Captain. “I’m just doing what I feel like doing.”

 

(x)(x)(x)

 

            Eeteuk looked up at the sound of the door opening.

            Three of the Elite walked in.

            Kangin, Yunho, and Yoochun sat across from the pretty boys, on the opposite couch.

            “What were you doing?”

            Eeteuk frowned at Kangin’s question.

            “What are you talking about?”

            Kangin threw one of the couch pillows at Eeteuk’s face.

            “You deliberately ran away from us when I told you the island wasn’t safe!” he shouted, fuming with anger.

            “So why are you upset?” questioned Eeteuk, standing up and throwing the pillow back at the pirate, “Since when did you care?!”

            “WHY IS EVERYONE ACUSING ME OF CARING?!” shouted Kangin, standing up as well, “I do not care about your welfare whatsoever!”

            “One of the crew had told us you were being attacked,” said Yoochun to the three boys, “It was only custom that we had to save you. If the crew had seen us just let you die, they’d have gotten suspicious.”

            “We had no choice,” added Yunho, arms crossed. He glared at Jaejoong. “And I am not an imbecile!”

            Jaejoong stuck his tongue out at the pirate.

            “Well, there’s nothing we can do about it now,” said Yoochun, “We’re all back on the ship, and it’ll be setting sail in the morning. I doubt you’ll try running away without your friend, am I right?”

            “Is Sungmin okay?” asked Junsu, worried. “He…he got beat up really bad.”

            Kangin headed to the doorway.

            “He’s lucky Kyuhyun’s a good person,” said the Captain, before leaving the library.

 

(x)(x)(x)

 

            Sungmin groaned.

            His body hurt all over.

            He opened his heavy eyelids.

            Kyuhyun was leaning over him, dabbing at his cheek with something cool and moist.

            “What…what are you doing?” mumbled Sungmin, jaw feeling as if it had been displaced, and roughly snapped back together. He sat up in the bed, pain shooting through his entire upper body. His legs dangled off the side of the mattress.

            “Just shut up,” said Kyuhyun, placing his tools onto a nearby table and picking up a different vial of liquid. “I’ve cleaned your wounds and set your leg into a splint—it’s not broken, but deeply bruised. I inserted a poison into your leg to hasten the healing process.”

            Sungmin simply sat and stared, watching as Kyuhyun knelt down and checked the wraps around his purpling leg. He couldn’t move—every time he tried a jolt of pain would course through his body.

            “Drink this,” said Kyuhyun, bringing the vial to Sungmin’s lips. “It’ll take away the pain.”

            The boy kept his mouth firmly shut and shook his head.

            “Look, I swear I’m not trying to poison you—this is good poison. It’ll only number the feeling in your arms and legs so you won’t have to feel the pain,” said Kyuhyun, trying to force the drink into Sungmin.

            But the boy refused.

            Kyuhyun slammed his fist against one of the bedposts near Sungmin’s head.

            “God damn! You’re so—argh!”

            He brought the vial to his own lips and filled his mouth with the poison.

            Then forced his lips onto Sungmin’s.

            The boy was shocked. He swallowed the entirety of the poison that came from Kyuhyun’s mouth in a single go.

            Then he ripped himself away from Kyuhyun and coughed, eyes filling with tears at the fiery sensation running down his throat.

            But the feeling settled, and Sungmin could sense the pain going away.

            He looked up at Kyuhyun, whose face was unbearably close to his own.

            “…why?” he asked; tired and weary from the day’s events. “Why are helping me?”

            A hint of emotions finally appeared on the boy’s face. The pirate looked confused.

            “I don’t even know,” he stammered, tangling his hands into his hair, “When I saw you…when you wouldn’t wake up-”

            His head fell into Sungmin’s lap.

            “That was the most amount of fear I have ever felt in my life.”

 

-chapter ten: Pearl Blue Isle [END]-

 

Sorry for the lateness (again) =___= I don’t have any promises as to an update for the next chapter. Hopefully I can write a bunch more before I leave for 2 months for a trip during the summer starting at the end of June.

 

Comments are love <3

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♫~ my flow is hotter than the flash from the click: kangteuk[info]comicbookending on May 5th, 2008 04:15 am (UTC)
Ooh, I missed this. ♥

The last line! So much promise! *_*

I literally went "Aaww" at Yoochun not liking it when people cry. I'm not sure if he was just saying that 'cause he didn't want to show he was affected by Junsu or if it was really true, but in either case, it's cute. Haha.

And sure you don't care, Kangin. Sure.

I'm anticipating what'll happen next~ 8D! ♥
zoolooney[info]zoolooney on May 5th, 2008 04:37 am (UTC)
...I am SO glad I decided to do that random search!

I love the premise of this fic, and I eagerly await more.
☆アメあと ~☆[info]daisuke4288 on May 5th, 2008 04:51 am (UTC)
that last little bit was OMG!!! *flails* adorable. i love this!! write more more more!!
(Anonymous) on May 5th, 2008 05:22 am (UTC)
I'm a silent reader, but I love your fic so much, and I'm seriously thankful that you've added a new chapter to it ^^
I love kyumin the best, thanks for making my day <3
love_stripes[info]love_stripes on May 5th, 2008 05:34 am (UTC)
you are NOT fullfilling my yoosu needs ms. kyumin shipper. still, your update did give me something to do for an hour. i just reread the whole thing. i knew i liked this, why don't you ever update? i plan to harass you about it more often. and anyway, click my name to link to my journal. all my fic chapters are there so you no longer have an excuse to not read them. i have faith in your ability to click your mouse button. <3 see you tomorrow
fbjin[info]fbjin on May 5th, 2008 05:39 am (UTC)
SORRY MS YOOSU SHIPPER.
[fb account, it's still me tho :P]
AND FINE I'LL READ YOUR STUFF TOMORO. IM GOING TO SLEEP NOAWZ.
and there'll be more yoosu later. i just thought i was focusing on them too much cause of the whole hyukjae business. i need to write about the yunjae more.
『you are too young to fall asleep』: 1 & 13[info]paperteuk on May 5th, 2008 05:42 am (UTC)
YAY♥ (funny because last night I was thinking of bothering you about this fic :D ZAKU IS PSYCHIC WHUT)

KYUMIN AND YOOSU OMG YAY
Eunice[info]cruel_disorder on May 5th, 2008 06:01 am (UTC)
OMG I'M LOVING THE KYUMIN. I THINK THEY ARE THE ADORABLEST COUPLE IN THIS FIC. Kyu's deadpan hostility and Min's vulgar language..and then Kyumin's the first one to break awwww omg My heart was pounding by the last line~ I really really love the premise of this story even though I usually detest crossdressing, but I think the way you gave each of the 'girls' a very distinct personality made me love them :D They're certainly no damsels in distress, even though they needed rescuing from the elites x'D

I hope you update sooon~ ♥
mynickyuuya[info]mynickyuuya on May 5th, 2008 08:24 am (UTC)
yay!!!
i was waiting f0r this... kyu is s000 in l0ve with sungmin!
ana_zid[info]ana_zid on May 5th, 2008 09:20 am (UTC)
I know... u don't really have time to write.. but when u do its like the best thing ever. Love ur fic and will be waiting for more~~!! Fighting~~ ^^
x_suicidetree_x[info]x_suicidetree_x on May 5th, 2008 01:01 pm (UTC)
Squeee!!! xD
finally KYUMIN! but aww poor Minnie D:
teh evil pirates beat him up Dx

can't wait for the next chapter xD!
I luff your fics! *hugs fic*
crystelle05: jae <3[info]crystelle05 on May 5th, 2008 01:41 pm (UTC)
YAY another chapter! i missed reading this fic <3

the Elite saving JaeSuTeukMin instead of ditching them...loved that! XD
and KyuMin becoming closer...so sweet <333

will wait for an update ^^
Asher: SuJu - Yesung hot[info]windsorcerer on May 5th, 2008 03:09 pm (UTC)
Oh oh oh! You're back (again)! I love this story so much. Don't leave again! ;)

And Kyuhyun gets SO many points for being so unbearably cute!
littleryu_chan[info]littleryu_chan on May 5th, 2008 06:30 pm (UTC)
Yay! You updated I was wondering if this story will ever continue
Anyways, KyuHyun is so cool~~!! Sugeee~~~!!
Love it <333
Omo... SungMin is hurt! I hope he'll recover soon, which he will when he has someone like KyuHyun who knows about medicine :D
[ ryutakay ][info]ryutakay on May 5th, 2008 06:55 pm (UTC)
kyuuuuuuuuuuuuute! <33333
yoosu and kyumin were so lovely! *o*
i love that gentleman like nature of yoochun <3 so cool xD
kyunnie is SOOO adorable! that last scene was da best! really, the image of kyunnie with his head on sungminnie's lap is stuck in my mind!!! O.o way too cute T_T can't wait for more *o* ooooooooh kyumiiiiiiiiiiiin <333333333333
DarkxYaoixLove[info]darkxyaoixlove on May 5th, 2008 09:13 pm (UTC)
I just spent my entire homework hour reading this story and will have to stay up all night making it up... But this was so worth it! The last line was so ARG it makes me want to know what happens next!
Blue Almond[info]aoinu99 on May 5th, 2008 10:34 pm (UTC)
me too.. T____T
but i didnt regret at all. hahaha
Blue Almond[info]aoinu99 on May 5th, 2008 10:34 pm (UTC)
this fic is soooooo much LOVE~~

waiting very impatiently for the next chapter~
(Anonymous) on May 6th, 2008 01:48 am (UTC)
Hi there...my name is Siti Ruzana Sumadi/Kurokage Tenshi
I love this fanfic; it's amazing...Can you tell me your name? Cos this fanfic is cool...I lke the way u made some Super Junior into Pirates..I wsh I could be like you...u hve talent on making this story so plz make make more

PS: My e-mail is angelicface328@hotmail.com
soojinisme[info]soojinisme on May 6th, 2008 03:03 am (UTC)
Re: Hi there...my name is Siti Ruzana Sumadi/Kurokage Tenshi
thanks for reading :D my real name is private, but here i go by soojin or just jin :3
wish you could be like me? ^////^ thanks. i still have a lot to learn though in the writing field.
i'll try to write as much as i can, but no promises D:
스팽규[info]xxivysaurus on May 6th, 2008 04:37 am (UTC)
asdfjakshg;aklsjdf;lwmrvoiarmarb.
KYUUUMINNNNNNNNN♥


PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE write more?
and update it sooner? :[

미녀 수현 ᄏᄏ || soohyeon[info]mochafreeze on May 7th, 2008 02:11 am (UTC)
AHHH WHY DO YOU DO ThiS
I WONT BE ABLE TO SLEEP NOW D:

♥♥♥♥♥



fbdongsaeng: Piano[info]fbdongsaeng on May 7th, 2008 08:18 am (UTC)
Why hello o.o
seungjea: geeky[info]seungjea on May 8th, 2008 03:07 am (UTC)
^^ kyu is falling for sungmin!
and crying junsu is making yoochun uneasy?
^^
dying to read more!
amylia[info]amylia on May 13th, 2008 10:21 am (UTC)
I'm really a fan of your fics. I like all of them and bookmark it too. Mind if I friend your journal just in case you updated and I really really don't want to miss it. There need to be more KyuMin fics!!
soojinisme[info]soojinisme on May 13th, 2008 01:33 pm (UTC)
sure, you can friend me ^^ i don't mind.
Jishu[info]jishu on June 8th, 2008 07:24 am (UTC)
Kyumin at last!!!!! <3
jae's wife-to-be in 2010[info]jaesa2617 on June 11th, 2008 09:51 am (UTC)
awww kyumin the first!! hahahaha. and probably kangteuk and yoosu. wad bout yunjae!! their still at loggerheads.
asuka2507[info]asuka2507 on June 11th, 2008 04:56 pm (UTC)
oh god i love the last line very much... a beginning to a new love story? <3333333
dongbangnie[info]dongbangnie on June 11th, 2008 07:38 pm (UTC)
oh yea to d rescue boys!!!
Olesia: Xiah-angel[info]dongbang_sarang on June 11th, 2008 07:40 pm (UTC)
oh, Kyu, you're the best... <3<3<3
just don't suppress your feelings anymore... you know you love him, how can you not?!

2soojinisme:
^___^ love your fic.. sorry that i keep speaking with your characters... -_-'
soojinisme[info]soojinisme on June 11th, 2008 08:19 pm (UTC)
lol that's okay XD most comments go that way anyways
ichanisland[info]ichanisland on June 13th, 2008 03:25 pm (UTC)
OMFG!!!
I DEFINITELY LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!
KYUMIIIIIIIIINNNNN!!!!
GOSH!!
>_____________<;;

it's my first time reply to ur fic,,
but i've been read ur fic since the first one in ur LJ~
lol
XDDDDD

i really love ur fic~
keep upd8-in~
;DDDD
kpopangel[info]kpopangel on June 13th, 2008 08:07 pm (UTC)
WHY IS EVERYONE ACUSING ME OF CARING?!” shouted Kangin why does kangin have to be so funny and innocent XD
ahh KyuMin <3333 ahh my fav pairing here.. i know i'm supposed to love jaeho most but kyumin is really <33333 and his poison is good poison, ne? =))
kpopangel[info]kpopangel on June 13th, 2008 08:09 pm (UTC)
forgot one thing.. the kiss was hot *melts into puddles of goo*
lol at this rate, our pirate boys are turning gay sooner or later xP poor them (or not really..)
boo*-*[info]potch_ee on October 9th, 2008 12:28 pm (UTC)
omo XD kyuhyun is starting to care~! eee!! i wish yunjae would progress soon though ^^ and yoosu's doing pretty good :D teuk's character fits him here XD I love this fic!!
chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on October 15th, 2008 05:03 pm (UTC)
Aww....Kyunhyun is falling for Sungmin..I wouldn't say the same for the other three..but they're close to falling for their "wife"...
jaejoongxyuno07[info]jaejoongxyuno07 on May 18th, 2009 02:38 am (UTC)
Awwww Kyu is sooo sweet <333
lovelysonata[info]lovelysonata on June 13th, 2009 09:32 pm (UTC)
Awwww....go Kyu!XD
 
 

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